I thought my 43 page dissertation was complete (It is attached/uploaded) but my professor asked for a bit more data put into it and I just cannot figure out how to add what he is looking for. If I don’t have the information he wants in the files that I have attached can you just create some data that makes sense for what my conclusion is. Here is his feedback to me when I submitted it. Has to be done with APA format. Please reach out to me if you have any questions.
Angel, you’ve done an incredible job on this project! I don’t think I’ve ever received a rough draft as thorough as this! Your writing style is great, and you do a really nice job integrating your sources into a narrative in your literature review. Your findings and conclusions are also solid, but this is where I think you could expand a bit more–you make a lot of statements about the trends you found, but don’t really provide any concrete evidence to support your claims. If possible, go back through here and include some data points (quotes from your notes, percentages or frequencies or tallies, etc.) that illustrate the strength and extent of these trends. Do this, and this will be done! Really excellent work!
I have to re-submit this next week. I cannot tell you how much I appreciate your help.
